Editing Continues.....

worked on a rough cut, Saturday night at work.....
experimented with dissolves, don't think I'll be using that device.
It looks like the jump cut will be the main weapon in the editing arsenal.
for the most part, took sunday night off,due to exhaustion, however, started on the tunnel footage.

dumped old edits and started fresh tonight.
Scene 8.
think I got something solid, to be honest.
I started with the tightest master, and worked out from there.
My reason twofold, one, the widest has some nice improvising(thanks Noelle)
and two, it's meant to pull back from the audience....the character's are fading...
Additionally, starting with the tightest master, also makes a smooth/ but not to smooth jump cut
from the previous scene.
also experimenting with flipping the image(horizontally) and adding a
color for a few seconds. then switching back to Black and White.
It's meant to accent the dialogue about "reality".

Tried some sound design....nothing particularly
grabbing, in terms of context, however, content
wise I think it will work (sound bites, from an am radio program).
we shall see.